An article in Campus magazine
entitled “Publics Participation For Education” by Miftakhul Khoiri presents the
first school Taman Siswa built by Ki Hajar Dewantara. Education paradigm
is growing in Indonesia to fulfill the spirit of education these days. Citizens
should get competent education. Education is responsibility by government and
the side of private sector individual and group. Because of limited cost, the
government opens the opportunity for public to participate and develop business
education such as; building opening schools, courses, or skill education with
facilities more complete and better than government schools. Supported by
complete and good facilities make this school rather expensive because it also
promises the good management on its education.
Indonesia has pesantren as
education system (Islamic boarding house models). It is classified into two
models: First Traditional, it does not collect the payment from the students
and students can stay and study freely. They study about Islamic science for
the sake of individual and public. The traditional pesantren still be
one choice by our society under class social. Second, Modern pesantren
collects the payment of the students because it gives more ability and
knowledge for students. They do not only study about Islam but also other
sciences like Biology, Mathematics, Economics, Physics, Language and Art. They
are prepared to face the era that always changes.
Without already realized the
friction that could be happened from motivation of organizer and management of
existing education. To get the good education with their equipment of facility
they perform forced the citizen get dealing with power of bargain and faces the
reality of expensive school and that also is for rich man children. Poor people
who have not the purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal
education. Government and private sector individually and group have big
homework to repair their education inspect that aims on making organization of
education.
I agree with the writer who says
that about publics participation for education is importance. He says that the
education not only managed by government, but also the society has contribution
to build education together, about how they create good education, both the
facilities, system and soon. The government should think that all the society
level can enjoy education reasonably. Moreover, to get good education with
equipment of facility they perform to force the citizen get the power of
bargain and faces the reality of expensive school and that also is for rich man
children. I think that the middle society should optimalize brilliant brain to
be able to compete with others. The writer says that the poor people who have
not the purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal education. I
think that this statement is true. The government and the private school should
really provide scholarship for the students who have competence to
enjoy education.
Writing Summary by Fitri Nurwiyanti
1. An article in Campus magazine
entitled “Publics Participation For Education” by Miftakhul Khoiri presents the
first school Taman Siswa built by Ki Hajar Dewantara.
2. Education paradigm is growing in
Indonesia to fulfill the spirit of education these days. Citizens should get
competent education.
3. Education is responsibility by
government and the side of private sector individual and group.
4. Because of limited cost, the
government opens the opportunity for public to participate and develop business
education such as; building opening schools, courses, or skill education with
facilities more complete and better than government schools.
5. Supported by complete and good
facilities make this school rather expensive because it also promises the good
management on its education.
6. Indonesia has pesantren as
education system (Islamic boarding house models).
7. It is classified into two models:
First Traditional, it does not collect the payment from the students and
students can stay and study freely.
8. They study about Islamic science for
the sake of individual and public.
9. The traditional pesantren
still be one choice by our society under class social.
10. Second, Modern pesantren
collects the payment of the students because it gives more ability and
knowledge for students.
11. They do not only study about Islam
but also other sciences like Biology, Mathematics, Economics, Physics, Language
and Art.
12. They are prepared to face the era
that always changes.
13. Without already realized the
friction that could be happened from motivation of organizer and management of
existing education.
14. To get the good education with their
equipment of facility they perform forced the citizen get dealing with power of
bargain and faces the reality of expensive school and that also is for rich man
children.
15. Poor people who have not the
purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal education.
16. Government and private sector
individually and group have big homework to repair their education inspect that
aims on making organization of education.
17. I agree with the writer who says that
about publics participation for education is importance.
18. He says that the education not only
managed by government, but also the society has contribution to build education
together, about how they create good education, both the facilities, system and
soon.
19. The government should think that all
the society level can enjoy education reasonably.
20. Moreover, to get good education with
equipment of facility they perform to force the citizen get the power of bargain
and faces the reality of expensive school and that also is for rich man
children.
21. I think that the middle society
should optimalize brilliant brain to be able to compete with others.
22. The writer says that the poor people
who have not the purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal
education.
23. I think that this statement is true.
24. The government and the private
school should really provide scholarship for the students who have competence
to enjoy education.
COHESION:
Ø Sentence 1 Lexical Cohesion >
Collocation
·
Taman Siswa
refers to Ki Hajar Dewantara. Because Ki Hajar Dewantara is the proponent of Taman Siswan in Indonesia.
Ø Sentence 2 and 3 Lexical Cohesion >
Reiteration > repetition
·
The word
“Education” repeats two times.
Conjuction
· The word “and” connect the side of
private sector individual and group.
Ø Sentence 4 > Ellipsis
·
Because of
the cost refers to education cost.
Conjunction
·
“Or” connect
building opening schools, courses, with skill education with facilities more
complete
·
“And”
connect the government opens the opportunity for public to participate with
develop business education.
·
“Because of”
connect limited cost with the government opens the opportunity for public to
participate and develop business education.
·
“And”
connect develop business education such as; building opening schools, courses,
or skill education with facilities more complete with better than government
schools.
Ø Sentence 5)
Conjunction
·
“Because”
connect supported by complete and good facilities, make this school rather
expensive with it also promises the good management on its education.
·
“And”
connect supported by complete and good facilities
Reference
·
“It”
is anaphoric refers to school that has good facilities and expensive cost.
·
“Its”
is anaphoric refers to school that has business education, good facilities, and
expensive cost.
·
“This” is
anaphoric refers to school that has business education.
Ø Sentence 6
Lexical
Cohesion > Synonymy
·
The word
“pesantren” has similar meaning with Islamic boarding house models.
Ø Sentence 7
Reference
·
First “It”
is anaphoric refers to Traditional pesantren.
·
Second ”It” is
anaphoric refers to model of the pesantren
Temporal
Conjunction
·
“First”
connect the explanation of two models of Pesantren; Traditional pesantren and
Modern pesantren.
Conjunction
·
“And”
connect it does not collect the payment from the students with student can stay
and study freely.
Ø Sentence 8
Reference
·
“They” is
anaphoric refers to students in traditional pesantren.
Ø Sentence 9
Temporal
Conjunction
·
“second”
connects the kinds of pesantren that had explained before.
Reference
·
“It” is
anaphoric refers to Modern pesantren.
Conjunction
·
“Because”
connect Modern pesantren collects the payment of the students with
it gives more ability and knowledge for students
Ø Sentence 10
Lexical
Cohesion > Reiteration > repetition
·
The
repetition of word pesantren is pointed out that pesantren to be the important
thing to be discussed.
Ø Sentence 11
Reference
·
“they” is
anaphoric refers to the students in modern pesantren.
Ø Sentence 12
Reference
·
“they” is
anaphoric refers to the science that have prepared by the modern pesantren.
Ø Sentence 13
Ellipsis
·
“Organizer”
refers to the people who organize the school management.
Conjunction
·
“And”
connect motivation of organizer with management of existing education.
Ø Sentence14
Reference
·
“They” is
anaphoric and cataphoric refers to government and private sector.
Conjunction
·
First “and”
connect they perform forced the citizen get dealing with power of bargain
with faces the reality of expensive school
·
Second
“and” connect faces the reality of expensive school with that also is for rich
man children.
Ø Sentence 15
Reference
·
“they” is
anaphoric refers to poor people.
Ø Sentence 16
Conjunction
·
“and”
connect government with private sector individually
·
“and”
connect private sector individually with group.
Reference
·
“their” is
anaphoric ally refers to poor people education.
Ø Sentence 17
Reference
·
“I” is
anaphoric refers to Fitri Nurwiyanti.
·
“The writer”
is anaphoric refers to the person who write the article on Campus Magazine
Miftakhul Khoiri.
Ø Sentences 18
Lexical
Cohesion >> Synonymy
·
“He” refers
to the writer that had mentioned in previous sentence.
Conjunction
·
“But” explains
contradiction meaning. It is about the needs to develop education.
·
Correlative
conjunction “both…and” connect good education both the facilities, system with
other components.
Ø Sentence 19
Conjunction
·
“That”
connects the government should think with all the society level can enjoy
education reasonably. (subordinating conjunction)
Ø Sentence 20
Conjunction
·
“Moreover”
connects the way to get good education that has been explained in the previous
sentence. (adversative conjunction)
·
First “ and”
connect they perform to force the citizen get the power of bargain and faces
the reality of expensive school
·
Second “and”
connect faces the reality of expensive school with that also is force
rich man children.
Reference
·
“They” is
anaphoric refers to the government, private sector individually and group.
Ø Sentences 21
Reference
·
“I” is
anaphoric refers to Fitri Nurwiyanti
Substitution
·
“Others” is
substitutes other people.
Ø Sentence 22
Lexical Cohesion
>> Synonymy
·
“The writer”
refers to Miftakhul Khoiri.
Reference
·
“They’ is
anaphoric refers to poor people.
Ø Sentences 23
Reference
·
“I” is
anaphoric refers to Fitri Nurwiwanti.
·
“This” is
anaphoric refers to the statement that says the poor people who have not the
purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal education.
Ø Sentences 24
Conjunction
·
“And”
connect the government with the private school